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Nume, sketch 2.0

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She can be taught! Better than previous attempts Y/N?

Random note: that's a full Windsor knot there. I was informed by a helpful friend that a guy with a stick up his butt would probably go with that rather than the half-Windsor.

This will probably be colored unless anyone spots errors that I've missed. Do please mention it if you do see something off. I'd like this portrait to be really good.

Mechanical pencil, 2008.

Mine. No touch.
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It looks better in some ways than the previous, but the previous one is better in some other ways. Mainly in the chin/jaw area, which looks a bit lopsided here. I did like the detail of the other. I know it seems like I'm contradicting myself a bit with what I said about the previous version. ^^; But now that I look at it again, I think I'd like to take back what I said about the lines. ^^;

Yeah, I dunno, this version is definitely cleaner, and somehow overall more...appealing. Well somehow he looks...handsomer? Er...well probably not the best term but I that's all I can think of.

Argh...I just...don't know. They all look pretty good to me.
Oh, and I like the hair in this one for some reason..